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Coaxing the story out

  • Jul. 8th, 2009 at 9:12 PM
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I've been struggling with a character detail for a few days now. She's an important secondary character, and this particular detail will be closely tied to the story's main plot. I thought, if I could just get her to tell me* this bit about herself, then the plotting would start to fall into place. But she wouldn't give it up. I'm very eager to start the actual storytelling for this new project, so today I decided I would just push ahead with the plotting and hope that this character detail would fall into place that way, instead.

Voila! Within (I'm not kidding) ten minutes of opening my mind to plot ideas, I had the character idea nailed down.

It's good to remember that stories are not formulas. They are living, breathing, fluid mysteries that need to be coaxed out of our minds and hearts and onto the page.

*I'd like to note, for the record, that I enjoy speaking about my process this way however what I really mean when I talk about things like negotiating with my characters for information is that I was wrestling with my own mind to produce an idea worthy of the story. That's just not as fun to say. But I do believe strongly that the writer is in the driver's seat of the story and the characters, however real they may seem and feel, are still fictional. I do not believe in The Muse. I do not believe in Writer's Block. I believe in the power and creativity of my own mind (and yours!) and I believe in my ability to make mistakes and plow ahead for hundreds and hundreds and hundreds of words, ignoring said mistakes until I finally hit a wall and my mind refuses to produce anymore words until I fix the mess I made.

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[info]cathschaffstump wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 01:28 am (UTC)
It's good to remember that stories are not formulas. They are living, breathing, fluid mysteries that need to be coaxed out of our minds and hearts and onto the page.

Can I quote you, and use that quote on my Goodreads page?

Because that's really a great quote.

Catherine
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:26 am (UTC)
Absolutely and thanks! :)
[info]tinachristopher wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 02:25 am (UTC)
Hm, sounds interesting...and cath is right, it's a great quote.

How do you deal with plot problems though? I have the seedling of a story, the 2 main characters and the baddie and I know where I want to end up. At the moment I'm still staring at that big gap in the middle, so any advice on how to fill the hole would be appreciated (once you've had some rest;D).
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:27 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm actually going to devote an entire post to answering your question, so look for that.
[info]tinachristopher wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 02:06 am (UTC)
That sounds great! I look forward to it.

[info]kathys_shadow wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 04:12 am (UTC)
Poor Muse.... now she's depressed.

Actually I agree with you--we have a lot of ideas about writing that sprung up in Romanticism, that while they're, well, romantic, simply aren't true.

I'm glad you got the character nailed down--your neurons firing, that's what did it!
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:28 am (UTC)
Aw, poor Muse. ;)

I also think there's honestly something to be said for letting things go. Once you get out of your own way, the solution has a way of presenting itself.
[info]david_bridger wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 05:17 am (UTC)
Well done! Enjoy!

*But what does your Muse say about all this, though?* :)
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:28 am (UTC)
LOL!
[info]sboman wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 05:28 am (UTC)
re: writer in the driver's seat
Hallelujah, someone else feels the same. And you said it perfectly. For a long time now I've been trying to pinpoint why it bothered me that authors talked as though their characters were living, breathing and speaking to them...I find it irritating, and yet, I do it myself at times. But the way you put it explains everything!!!

They are not the ones in control, because they are not real. It is a more palatable way to talk about it, though. I think I will quote/link this in a post of my own, if you don't mind.
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:31 am (UTC)
Re: writer in the driver's seat
Quote/link away. :)

It doesn't irritate me because I think a lot of writers do talk about their process this way even if they truly act in control of their characters and stories. There are exceptions, though...

I've decided to post more extensively on this subject next week, so stay tuned.
[info]jongibbs wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 11:49 am (UTC)
Lol, great disclaimer :)
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:31 am (UTC)
Thanks. :) It seems to have gotten more attention than the actual post, so I've decided to post a series about it next week.
[info]jongibbs wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 12:01 pm (UTC)
I look forward to reading it :)
[info]jeniwrites wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 02:28 pm (UTC)
Well said!!
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:31 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)
[info]jp_davis wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 05:10 pm (UTC)
There's a whole post in that footnote, and thoughts well worth considering.
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:32 am (UTC)
Apparently so! It got more than its fair share of comments. I've decided to post a short series about it next week.
[info]music_lover3 wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 03:21 am (UTC)
Way to go in finding out what you needed to know! And that was very well said!
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 03:28 am (UTC)
:) Thanks!
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